Eh.
Very mediocre. Didn't bother making a storyline, fighting wasn't even that great for a sprite movie. Just seems like a short video you came up with cause you were bored.
Eh.
Very mediocre. Didn't bother making a storyline, fighting wasn't even that great for a sprite movie. Just seems like a short video you came up with cause you were bored.
"Eh"
Very mediocre. Didn't bother giving any good arguments. Reasoning wasn't even that great for a review. Just seems like a short text you came up with cause you were bored.
Eh.
There are a lot of misalignments. Text was bad. Music was poorly put together. storyline isn't too great. It could use a lot of work :l
Thx for reviewing! Yea... i know... i will fix it later on my spare time... =D
Well.
Bad alignment on the symbols and the text was horrible.
But the fight scenes were actually pretty good considering how bad the alignments and text were :P
So yeah, overall still a nice flash xD
Yeah :P I just fixed it, ill be re-uploading an updated one soon. thanks for the review :3
Oh sweet :3
I liked the song you used in the title, I actually left it on to listen... You should make the song loop and make it a bit shorter, that'll decrease the file size nicely. And for the animation, it was great. Not much to ciritcize on, I actually feel inspired to make a sonic flash now :P... But yeah, keep it up ;D
Thx and yeah XD i should of decreased the music abit i guessed.
LOL its surprising i actually like that title aswell :P.
Shit son.
Great job. There were quite a few things parts of the animating in the beginning that were irking me quite a bit.. but I can tell you began improving a bit throughout the video.. The storyline is pretty awesome, I've always wanted someone to make a good video with Chao's. It came out really well, and it makes me want to watch episode 2 pretty bad. :P
It's obvious how much effort you put into it, so glad you were able to complete it. I could see why you nearly went mad xD
Some of the content in this Flash has been sitting on my computer since 2008, the rest of it was completed in random periods between then and it's release. Naturally, some of the newer stuff would look better than the older.
Great
What was the song used for the credits? :P
The vs. victory theme from Dr. Mario on the NES.
Eh.
Animation was pretty good. But about 80% of the jokes were ones I've seen before that you've just changed slightly.
Animation was fine, ideas were quite unoriginal.
Yes, it's hard to make up original ideas with a short amount of time.
Pretty good :P
I like your animating style.
You could've animated the standing frames. In my opinion, the Mabi graphics didn't fit in too well, but it works I guess, kinda looks like your maple character xD
Also, the background quality is pretty bad, go into the library, right click the bitmap, goto properties, then set it to "Lossless PNG" This will make bitmaps much higher quality :P
Also for maple animations, what I like to do is smooth the bitmaps. To do that, right click the bitmap in the library, goto properties, then check the box that says "Allow Smoothing". I think it looks good on maple animations, you can see an example of it in one of my flashes on my NG page. (I would submit it here if I had finished)
Last thing is, this was kinda short D: ... But eh, still nice :O
Thanks :D I was going to do the standing frames for this one and I had some for Trevor but since I didn't have any for Peter (Lost the codes and was kinda in a rush to finish all my work), so it would have looked awkward. And thanks for the advice :D I'll try testing that out with my next animation ^.^ Thanks a bunch for the review and advice :D
Could use...
Sound effects
Preloader
Also I could actually see slight improvement from later on in the video.
ya i was thinking that too.
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