spritefan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DE_dust2]

Amazing job.

I dunno though, I didn't see as much of a battle in this one though. you focused on humor a little too much I think. Overall it is still amazing though, so great job

[Goku V.S. Vegeta Preview]

Okay.. No

Don't submit previews to newgrounds, it's totally unnecessary unless it's something so epic I'd shit my pants like Power Star 5. Also, whats up with people taking Alvins Fx sprites? I saw maybe one sprite that hasn't been in Maple Ball Z the Fx is very overused and I just feel like vomiting on my screen. Also don't use Particle illusion. The shinyness and pretty effects may give an idiot a hard on but rarely can someone actually pull off using particle illusion well. I've only really seen Proxide with Sf vs Mk 3 pull off a good sprite video with particle illusion.

Overall the animation is pretty good and it'll prolly turn out to be an okay movie, the story line sucks and needs maybe a bit more story to make it a story. But it's fine I guess for a fight. Please don't submit previews, wasting newgrounders time.

volkain5 responds:

I submitted the preview to see whether I should scrap the project altogether, or keep working on it as planned. I'm probably going to try my way to inject some story into there. I was kinda just summing up the fighting Goku and Vegeta had in the anime. Anyway, when you say "particle illusion" what do you mean? NVM, I googled it. If you are talking about the explosion, it was taken off of MUGEN.

[NintenStory Part 1]

Criticizing nazi coming in :D

First off the clouds are going so fast it's making them choppy, it just doesn't look good when it's that choppy if you really need it that fast increase the fps but I don't recommend it if you are at 24-30 fps as it is. I was still able to read the text but the speed is a bit fast for most people so slow it down, add back shadow to the text so it will be easier to read or simply just make chat bubbles in the maplesim simulator. The clouds when the jump up.. bad, they are not meant to be placed on top of each other, just side to side. the most effective way to probaly make clouds moving up is have the clouds zoomed in so it fills the whole screen, blur it a bit, then have it shake in a fast motion.. it takes practice to get it to look nice but it's a pretty effective way to make clouds move that way o.o;

Well you can animate fighting decently so I won't criticize on that much. at least you got fighting down pretty well :P

And of course one of the main reasons for the low score is the lenght of this, if the movie isnt great + it short + sprite, newgrounders just hate it. May be better off on youtube where everyone is nice, I dunno.

Gl on future stuff~

Soulsafloat responds:

OMG u gave me the best review congratulations!!!! u got all of my bad points too! and u gave me my best review score u rule XD

[Sonic Vs. Shadow]

Ah..

I was going to say, what the fuck these are all alvin's sprites. Just at the end I realized it was for a collab for him. Well pretty nice job, could of improved in a few area's but still deserves a 10 and 5/5 to me :P

[tRip Impact: 2]

Not your best D:

But definitively good job, I could kinda see where you started this up again it was sorta a lil past midway I think.. or around there I actually could see the animation improve. Still impressive :D I love your animations~

[Final Duel[TRAILER]]

Reminds me of Mk vs Sf 3

interesting your animation is pretty smooth and who doesnt love the pretty partical illusion effects :P Can't wait till full one comes out

[Ravemonkey]

No sezuire warning? :D

*foams from the mouth and falls over* (notrly)

Great job though O:

PookatDino responds:

I added a flashing color warning just for you!

Also, thanks. :D

[Legend of Miyamoto]

Fucking legit! ;D

Jesus most original shit I've seen in like forever, amazing job too lol that was great :]

[ParodyRangersTheMovie 1-2]

oh my..

I hope the other parts make up for this one, I was a bit dissapointed. The animation is great, better then ever but the jokes were the worst I've see from you I'm sorry to say. I know better will be coming don't try too hard to be funny, it'll just make it lame :/

[The Assumption Song]

Whooo 1000th comment

lols I loved the song, animation was okay o:

mainly the song that gives this a 5